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Young Widower

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I always slept on my left side and you on your right and when it was late and we had finished our daily tales, I would feel your breathing on my cheek. It would always reach a certain soft cadence and I would know you were dreaming then.

Now I sleep on my right side, so the last evening glimpse and the first grey morning scenes are the same, a faceless beige wall, flaking paint, crumbling brick.

I 've turned away from the unused pillow, away from the undisturbed sheets, each morning so rigid, cold and clean.

You’re not on your side of the bed anymore; instead you’ve been replaced,
by all of God’s hate.

Every day I awake now, just a little less alive.
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Ypres's avatar
I liked most of this, but there was one line that particularly grabbed me: "instead you've been replaced, by all of God's hate." That's a striking statement, and I think the most real one of the piece. Wonderful work.