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the last day of the World by *brassteeth:iconbrassteeth:



On the last day of the World
we discovered,
(of all things)
wine favours the liver
far better than brandy.

Remember when
there were so
many goddam miracles,
we couldn’t seal
the embankment?
Those bricks wept
of hand-blood and
still they poured unstoppable,
those weird
serendipities,
like leadlight
candles,
through stained glass
moulds.

And You?
Well, You grew my feet,
to fit certain sandals.
But hot blotches and spacious
sizes are no substitutes
for freedom.
Objective philanthropic growth?
Oh please, life was never so big.

And Myths?
I declare, what lit
and talking box,
will tell me what to think again?
What sediments of wit and foreplay
slip though these waves of mud?
Show me your chaos and
I will present to you
the gift of perfect order.


And Time?
History built stone sticks,
from earth and wood,
to hold our strange desires.
Sand to glass,
towers with cloud views.
Rivers swerved
and diffused,
and we forgot to ask,
if they could ever disappear.

(Turns out they could.)


And They?
Well They emmitted
a kind of melancholy joy,
on the last day of the World.
Through tender introspection
and newspaper print
that sat slippery
across borders,
wallpapering the children
with prophecies and idyllics,
for all that mattered
in the end.


Thoughts?
Yes we learnt of the dream,
save its origins.
Seems those always are, even when
pulled inside out,
further from the soul
as one could ever be.
Wouldn’t you know it,
turns out we
were all different
in the end.

On the last day of the World,
wine
was judged better
than brandy….

And Me?
Well I remember,
when Love was a good word.
©2009-2010 *brassteeth
:iconbrassteeth:

Author's Comments

or

"Ramblings after seperation (from body)"



Words from the last day of any poet, living or dead. These are mine and I am both.

Simply Poetry Final day poem.

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:icontingtingwindchimes09:
amazing :)

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Big Bang is VIP! <3

love you BB [link]

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:iconbrassteeth:
Thankyou. You are so kind!

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BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconiorhaelwen:
This is quite spiffy indeed. I like the part regarding 'They' the best, though it's all quite well written. I also like that you wrote it in an open form; it suits the subject far better than a more structured form would. :D

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try so hard to make the pieces all fit
smash it apart just for the fuck of it
:iconbrassteeth:
Great, Thanks for the feedback and taking the time toread my work. I think THEY is the one I got closest to what I was trying to do as well.

Thanks!

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BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconiorhaelwen:
Sure thing. I always take a look at the galleries of people who comment my stuff. It just wouldn't feel right to me not to. :shrug:

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try so hard to make the pieces all fit
smash it apart just for the fuck of it
:iconbrassteeth:
Thanks. Great attitude!

--
BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconiorhaelwen:
:D

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try so hard to make the pieces all fit
smash it apart just for the fuck of it
:iconlizzysunshine77:
this is a wonderful poem.

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I'm a pretty impossible lady to be with.
:iconbrassteeth:
:wow: Thanks for that, thats great of you to say. Thank you.

--
BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance

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