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The Painting's Frame by *brassteeth:iconbrassteeth:



Watercolours
of finished fisherman,
eyes bright
with brushstrokes
of aqua-blue,
given goldfish pupils,
and draining, seeping garments,
backed by bursts,
salt-watered waves.

No.

I am for the fences,
the stone walled ledges.
I am here, like the King,
for the gold gilt borders,
those intricate
woven edges.

Peripheral parallel,
herding back in silence,
landscapes of thunder,
stampedes of wild Ponies,
still life sacks
of spilling cornflour,
spotted hay, a sunny bay,
and perfect, oiled,
summer days.

Damning all dreams,
surrounding the scenes,
to placate and demarcate,
with a single,
straight-faced
expression,

an ocean of hues,
mere mountains of oil,
piles of precious pigments,
magnifying, surrounding, raising,
a Mephistopheles,
of perfect angles.

Sitting at the side
of painted dreams,
balls and dabs, rubs
and strokes,
spots and smears,
it appears,
I fear,
that
like all things
I am also framed,
by a greater mystery.
©2009-2010 *brassteeth
:iconbrassteeth:

Author's Comments

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"When the painting frame looked out"

Simply Poetry

Word association

Watercolours, cornflour and Ponies

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:iconskerd22:
Quite bold, and very intriguing.
:iconbrassteeth:
Thankyou, thankyou!

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BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconultimateoutlaw:
This was, like, a sensory attack... and yes, quite intriguing. I dig it :heart:

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"What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is the breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is the little shadow which runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset." Crowfoot, Blackfoot warrior and orator 1830 - 1890
:iconbrassteeth:
Hey,
Love your nice feedback.
Thanks and yeh, amazing what a trip to the "American Impressionists" can do!

--
BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconyouinventedme:
the no is my favorite bit
it has character

the whole piece is great though
and I love the close

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconbrassteeth:
Thanks.
I did not want to over imbue the Frame with a sense of personality outside of it's denial characteristic. It really is a function of creating boundaries. Frames are rather blunt that way.

Thanks for the feedback, yours is always welcome.

:wave:

--
BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:icontingtingwindchimes09:
:) I really like this, because of the strong imagery and not only that, it can be conceived as a picture yet you talk about what the picture is made out of "the mountains of oil" :P this is definitely one of my favorites of your works

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Big Bang is VIP! <3

love you BB [link]

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:iconbrassteeth:
thanks, I like that, I like that alot, thats true...

Cheers!

--
BT.

"The truth knocks on the door and you say, "Go away, I'm looking for the truth," and so it goes away."
— Robert M. Pirsig
Zen and the Art of Motorcycle maintanance
:iconypres:
Wow, images. I particularly like the way you snuck in rhymes here and there, among the flood of imagery. One of the things I struggle with is an excess of abstract language, so I'm fascinated to see how you concrete-ifed something so unusual.

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